There she was ....At the corner of the room sitting on a bench ,her head thrown back ...The aura around her had a charismatic feminine elegance that seemed out of place on that dusty, rickety bench....She wore a skirt that had a light shade of red which draped shapelessly about her lissom body....Her hands were on the table, her posture taut as if she were unconscious of her own body....The look on her face gave a feel of someone very astute yet diffident....Those teensy weensy black eyes gave fascinating insights about a story that intended to reach someone....Those luscious lips, that mesmerising smile had a message to convey, a message so serene yet profound ...
machi its nice and descriptive.. but oh so incomplete..
ReplyDeleteya da ....yet to complete it ....took 40 min to write this itself ...i'll try to complete it as soon i can ....
ReplyDeleteu have the picture of tht girl.. y did u put some random pic.. a vivid one btw.. use of grandiloquent language could be avoided coz idiots like me had to look up the dictionary 4 each n every word..
ReplyDeleteWhich girl you talking about ? got no clue about that :P :D ....And the language was not much grandiloquent also ....N my its good you opened the dictionary once in a while ....Atleast for reading this
ReplyDeleteRegarding d writing, gr8 job man! regarding d photograph chosen nice, but b8r put d original one![:P].."'Coz 'DEVILS love RED'" ( MANU ROX 'coz!)
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